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, i need to ,
this is weird isn't it.
meaning: my English teacher said that the comma basically means "and," and in the choir when there's a comma we usually breathe there. Usually. So basically the "sentence" says, "and i need to breathe"
and i mean breathe as in "space to breathe, down time, me time" thing, not the i need oxygen kind of breathe.

weird i know.
question: should i change the title to "Breathe"?
every time i see a comma by itself i mentally inhale :XD:
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ForestoFairies's avatar
I think  "," is the right title.